(another) Portfolio Crit
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- optika
Dear QBN,
I've just gone freelance and launched the following site.
http://www.optikacreative.com/
I've not really done much web before so would love some constructive feedback.
Kindest of regards,
Optika.
- stewart0
too much compression on the jpgs
- Without question.blaw
- +1WhiteFace
- Cool. I think I was still on dial-up the last time I did a web site. Will re-export imagesoptika
- Try GIFsmonospaced
- stewart0
"We design for a diverse range of clients"
"We are small and compact team"Better be upright an tell them how the matter stands.
- _me_0
spell check - collaborators has 2 l's.
"oc" may mean something to you [ obvioulsy Optika Creative ] but it looks like a spelling mistake...
capitalise sentences...
last sentence - do you mean if they get in touch you quote them a price to have a discussion about their design requirements?
- Complexfruit0
"i am small and compact team of 1"
Sorry, but I feel if you're just one person I wouldn't use the term team to describe yourself.
Once you get into the portfolio section everything is pretty straight forward and I like that. Nice and simple. To the point.
And one other suggestion, I'd get rid of the "holding page" when you click on "portfolio." I think you should display the first work in your list once the viewer clicks on "portfolio."
Good luck with the freelancing mate.
- optika0
Great feedback so far folks. Much appreciated.
- Dancer0
I would look at your about copy again. It's not a smooth read.
Your work is better than the website. And, what's up with that logo?