Logo Critiqué
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- MrOneHundred0
- I kinda like itFlorida
- this is so much better than the stuff you posted beforeFlorida
- This is nice mr100. Have you shown the concepts to the client yet? Which of the 3 are do they like?Complexfruit
- ..errr...take out "are" in that last sentenceComplexfruit
- Not yet. Presenting tomorrow. I’ll post more.MrOneHundred
- this looks pretty good, mr100! the title is squeezed in a little too tight and might blur when it's small._salisae_
- but otherwise, nice work :)_salisae_
- Thanks. This one is a balancing act, and far from done – in my mind, anyway.MrOneHundred
- whatever ... I still find that this is bestFlorida
- goody jobby!Florida
- and nicy worky!Florida
- hehe!Florida
- looks great!jiaf
- forcetwelve0
i really like the 1st concept - first option. what's it like if you take the ligature away from the A in village?
- MrOneHundred0
- I had all sorts of ligatures and stuff going on, but I just ditched them.MrOneHundred
- it looks a little all over the place. why dot a capital I?_salisae_
- heaps betterforcetwelve
- the G makes sense/looks nice. and the O looks right. keep reducing._salisae_
- The i was kind of an accident. If I move the dot away, it looks wrong.MrOneHundred
- I like the direction this concept is going as well.Complexfruit
- i like the VI ... it's ornate, doesn't have to make perfect sense.horton
- no no no, the one you posted above is so much better!Florida
- this is good too i like both, nice developmental work mr one hundred.jimzyk
- Amicus0
Keep it up Mr... I like the concepts so far, but I'm wondering how they'll be used on other materials... I always try to think of the end use before presenting clients so I have stronger arguments to backup my fav :)
- MrOneHundred0
The logo use will be minimal. They don’t have much of an above-ground presence. Probably just stationery and the occasional poster. The brief was, once again, quite minimal.
- horton0
my thoughts regarding the truck logo...
- I know. My boss is under the illusion that quantity trumps quality.MrOneHundred
- forcetwelve0
how'd you go with this mate? client like it?
- MrOneHundred0
Update: All references to Byron Bay to be removed “we don’t want that association”, WTF!?!
I am removing them as we speak, but waiting on a phone call to try and figure out how the brief can say “More arty with a Byron colour flavour” but not want any association with Byron Bay. This is what happens when getting a brief is impossible – you get the brief AFTER you’ve done the job.
Will post the finished items soon.
- The job is done. What they're asking for are revisions :)BuddhaHat
- Concepts presented to “unders” decision makers being screened from “unsuitable” options.MrOneHundred
- mg330
First concept, third one. They other two are too busy - too many notes in the Sounds word.
- CphGD0
Def. the 1st one. Have you thought about adding some thin lines over the words to make the note idea a little clearer. Maybe it's a lame idea, but it is worth a try and would make it very easy to sell = Quick Cash : )
- moamoa0
beautiful job mr100!! I agree with forcetwelve.
- MrOneHundred0
- Top one is rockin, colours are beautiful, well done.BuddhaHat
- Nice work, Hundy.
Good luck.NotByHand - Thanks guys. I always struggle with colours. Always.MrOneHundred
- you know my favourit. but I am not so keen about the colours ;)moamoa
- I tend to agree. I can live with this, but I have more subtle palette as a backup.MrOneHundred
- The plan was to tick all the boxes with this one and then negotiate from their. I am dreaming.MrOneHundred
- hahahha for "I am dreaming" LOLzmoamoa
- forcetwelve0
i love the 1st and 3rd. i hate the 2nd. great work mate.
- MrOneHundred0
Looks like I struck out.
“We don’t like any of these”.
Live and learn.
- Serious? That was the only response you got?
Holy fuck.NotByHand
- Serious? That was the only response you got?
- MrOneHundred0
More or less. I mentioned that it was kind of hard to get into the right headspace from such a limited brief. They claimed to have sent a brief through (they didn’t as far as we can tell). They asked if I can do some more and send them through straight away. I said “no”. I tweaked the stacked version of the first one and do not anticipate any further pleasantries.
- I have gone about 5x over budget already, ffs.MrOneHundred
- Sorry to hear it.NotByHand
- sorry to hear that. those fuckers I hate them all!!!moamoa
- ukit0
It's so annoying when a client doesn't give you any idea what they want. I hate that.
- forcetwelve0
email them a link to this thread
- NotByHand0
What was the brief you got exactly?
And do they have a site currently?- website for our company www.gdesign.com.au not much new stuff on there.MrOneHundred
- working on my own website s at the mo.MrOneHundred
- ukit0
Someone bump janne76's thread, New Ways To Kill Clients