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- b2
Hi hears the link
http ://e31507.monline.dk/green/index... should I have gone to woodwork class instead...
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- Nairn0
I think you're probably a bit too gay for woodwork class.
- b20
Soft furnishings perhaps.
- Nairn0
It's like it's a site for some kind of Candy or Fifties-themed clothing - not an environment site. I quite like the big, bold logo and the way it juts off the page, though can't work out why you've opted to give the depth that putrid light puce colour.
I dislike the way the only leaf you've used shunts the primary header rightways, breaking up overall alignment.
Your homepage should have more content - the two-line sentence and generic stock photo don't really deliver much - how about merging 'home', 'blog' and 'about'?. Your Products page should lead with something, rather than dumping you into another menu, and your Game looks odd in Playstation 3 format.- Have a gander at http://www.treehugge… - it meshes green and tech quite ably, without being 'too green'Nairn
- *buys http://putridlightpu…Jaline
- spendogg0
your header colors don't feel natural. when i think green i think earthy, not super mario bros. you need to work on your color combos, big time. your buttons look like they are straight outta powerpoint. you need to work on your type treatment - it feels unaturally distorted (pet-peeve of mine). keep the grid
- ********0
like spendogg said, the colours in the header somewhat lack harmony. and there´s something wrong with the perspective of the logo/signet. I´d try to develop a more "organic" look.
Is the site´s content already finished, or is content creation not a target of the assignment?
- b20
no it's finished, its not so much about the content did any one check the flash animation.