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    It's like it's a site for some kind of Candy or Fifties-themed clothing - not an environment site. I quite like the big, bold logo and the way it juts off the page, though can't work out why you've opted to give the depth that putrid light puce colour.

    I dislike the way the only leaf you've used shunts the primary header rightways, breaking up overall alignment.
    Your homepage should have more content - the two-line sentence and generic stock photo don't really deliver much - how about merging 'home', 'blog' and 'about'?. Your Products page should lead with something, rather than dumping you into another menu, and your Game looks odd in Playstation 3 format.

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