Poster Crit - Rybo
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- tank020
I like the illustration but i would do something more with the typo...
but your making good progress man!
- janne760
hey, rybo. i like the 4D illustration! really nice.
perhaps do some more about the type? give it some more space in relation to the image?
- skt0
the illy is quite nice... the poster not so much. as janne said, perhaps do something more with the type, or anything at all with the type. not that i could really see it, bit small for a crit.
- rybo0
- Fariska0
Hierarchy, my dear, Hierarchy.
The text is totally lacking hierarchy.
Order the copy in terms of importance and work on weights and size of the type according to that oredered list.
A poster should catch your eye/attention with some (not all) visual elements. And then if the hook is good should get you to read the other bits of information.
So Hierarchy it!
- typist0
shit spacing and leading, left and right not visually balanced
bigger heading
- Bluejam0
i think the posters are drab, boring and static.
they lack the dynamism, the energy and the colour of what they should be telling me about - a dance performance.sorry, but it looks like you are advertising a funneral, not a theatre show.
stuff to look at...
http://www.typographicposters.co…
http://www.typographicposters.co…
http://www.typographicposters.co…
- Fariska0
..or just have a look at this thread here:
http://www.qbn.com/topics/575263…
- itstimefortea0
did you use scriptographer for the illustration?
- roundabout0
I like the design, but it does not sat Dance event to me.
- mistermik0
do the text on logo(or whatever it is)in 2 columns
First column info - 2nd column date, costs etcand see if the font you use comes in bold
- Orbit0
It feels more like a POS graphic for a B&O television.
A bit cold and efficient, but not enough to be stark and arresting.
- OhYeah0
Like the 4D a lot and looks sweet on the black background, but the type you used is no good.
No a type pro like the other people on here so can't tell you what to use.
- rybo0
am i going the wrong way now...http://www.echoaroundtown...
- rybo0
- Typeface is too trendy, and in terms of a poster illegible as fuck!! think about it!!!uncle_helv
- The lower type has no association with 4D, but look better with some colour.roundabout
- uncle_helv0
I think by designing this way, you are confusing yourself!!!
- doesnotexist0
why black? for christmas - really? I would honestly start with a new concept that says christmas + dance more efficiently.
- jeveritt0
its trying too hard ... you've over cooked it