Logo, Looking for Feedback
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- matt310
haha now you are getting how to post on qbn
- jiaf0
Thanks for your great input airey, i really appreciate condescending asshole comments. It really helps me progress and grow as a designer...
psyche.
- airey0
please stop. maybe hire a designer to do it.
- there is noooooooooo designers, here!!!akrokdesign
- by the way, when will your portfolio be up? airey.akrokdesign
- imnotadesigner0
lol @ dbloc's wiki post...
"James Barry (surgeon) (1795–1865), believed to have been biologically female, a transman, or intersexed"
- BannedKappa0
how about a cute little bow
- sorry wrong topic...See Tatoo foot ideas...BannedKappa
- hahaismith
- UPS had one, it worked. lol.akrokdesign
- Nairn0
I actually quite like the two-toned text you've got up there - it's different without being offensive, minimal without being dull - it's got a bit of character and it stands out.
For sure, it probably doesn't whet the appetite of a knowing designer - but is the internet clown car of competing egos really what you're targetting?
That said it needs a bit more work and love put in to it - some of the details are quite ugly - but when I see the As and that Y, I'm actually slightly wet.
Well, not quite - but I do quite like it.
Take on board what people here have to say - but balance that off with what you feel inside - it's your logo, after all.
- Vicentvangogh0
- that's a good idea, food for thought! I like how it flows into the M.jiaf
- ukit0
I agree with moamoa's approach on this. This is a logo that will have to mesh with the rest of your work, better to make it fairly low key.
- moamoa0
- cavalli, veneta, andbergamo all are great.pylon
- Cheers, thanks for the references!jiaf
- bah, where you got all these nice logos from?skser
- :)skser
- I haz all vector files :)moamoa
- wanna have?moamoa
- yeees, give me some.
you knowz my email...skser - ja.... I don´t have it at home.. I´ll send you when I am back at studio..moamoa
- okeey:)skser
- moamoa, you need to add my logo to that sheet. :-) heh.akrokdesign
- hahhaahah gimmemoamoa
- dbloc0
famous name
- tenpointtwo0
I personally hate Es that look like backward 3s. I think the font you've chosen is conveying a thin weak image. It doesn't strike me as "creative" enough. I think the gray parts make it feel sort of like the logo of a fashion company or a cheesy R&B singer in the 80's.
I think your first try with the initials was way better. But seeing the 2 different logos side by side, there is little, if any, consistency between them. What's the rationale behind the decisions you made? What feeling are you trying to convey with this logo? What does it say about you or your work? Your logo should speak for you, and this just isn't saying much.
- I was thinking along the lines of Fashion, It's an industry I'd like to do more work in.jiaf
- jiaf0
- you should look for aother font, those letters are not good, especially M E S & Rmoamoa
- The E bothers me especially.pylon
- fair enough. I actually made the letters myself, so i would have something unique.jiaf
- btw: don´t try to make a bloc with your name, I would luggest you to write them abreastmoamoa
- Please tightly kern your lettering, the tracking looking bad.Vicentvangogh
- pylon0
I agree with moamoa.
Keep it simple. Keep it clear. Subtlety is the name of the game.
- dbloc0
you could use just the name barry too.
- moamoa0
- just 20 seconds of work, so please don´t judge the kerning
:)moamoa - or the font....moamoa
- the kerning and the font both suck.....j/kdbloc
- Kerning sucks.
Shitty font.
What are you thinking? ;)pylon - ;(moamoa
- this is coolvetica, isn't it?skser
- nooooooooooo shame on you.moamoa
- Chalet NY mix :)moamoa
- lolskser
- ahhhhhhhskser
- font still sucks!skser
- except the y.. which letter sucks? naaa?moamoa
- skser = moamoa.
akrokdesign - don't knock chalet!johndiggity
- AHAHHAH @ akrok hahamoamoa
- dulljanne76
- just 20 seconds of work, so please don´t judge the kerning
- dbloc0
what's the track in the go skateboarding day video on your site?
- It's called "Feel It" by Gaye Rage, a local Calgary band.
http://profile.myspa…jiaf - haha.. so you posted in a wrong thread did ya? Funny a friend of mine has a GSD-vid onlineneverblink
- It's called "Feel It" by Gaye Rage, a local Calgary band.
- matt310
i prefer the tattoo one
- jiaf0
- whats up with the GREY/GRAYparts?akrokdesign
- I think it adds a bit a depth to it.jiaf
- you do know what grey in a logo means? "boring"akrokdesign
- i would keep it all black instead.akrokdesign
- I'm gonna add color when i create a colorscheme for my site + stationaryjiaf
- to be honest: it sucksskser
- you can purchase some nice fonts on the internetskser
- there are even some fonts available for free!skser
- Please explain why it sucks??jiaf
- I N T E R N E N E T!!skser
- ok, I will try...skser
- i like this!janne76