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- WeLoveNoise0
not finished btw
- Russell_Sprout0
haha, I was just about to ask whether it was finished or not and then you posted that comment!
- I think it's pretty cool too! What does this company do?Russell_Sprout
- :)WeLoveNoise
- thanks
their a small video production agency. new site goes live next weekWeLoveNoise
- meffid0
link failure.
- digdre0
change S en R
- moamoa0
it needs some work. espacially the l & s & r... its to complex, try to make it simple...
*I did a Logo for a coffee bar 6 years ago, name was/is = atmosphere, and I did it also in red :)
- :) dunno why i did it in red, cos thought blue wud be the obvious choiceWeLoveNoise
- lol.... I thing that was one of my reasons.. I´ll try to find my logo right now.. :) didn´t see it for yearsmoamoa
- :) yeah be gud to seeWeLoveNoise
- Mojo0
the s is weak, the m's middle point needs pulling down - needs more pattern to it, feels a bit like a maze
- WeLoveNoise0
yeh thought the s was gona be a problem
the R i like but think its need more width, not sure
the new M which i'm working on now has more of a decender in the middle
- WeLoveNoise0
it started of them giving the name in a font whilst i was making this nice flash site for them. the type was a shitty one called baha
i said WTF, u must be joking and told them if that was the case i wasnt doing their site. so played about with that type for 10 mins to show them how better the results were by getting it custom
hense why i got the branding job aswell
- moamoa0
- thats for a bar?digdre
- that's really nice moamoa! I don't like the 's' though.Russell_Sprout
- to me, it looks like a pharma logo :pdigdre
- come on guys, its old I was 20 :) the s looks indeed horrible :)moamoa
- yeh is nice
i like the aWeLoveNoise - ja for a bar, but it was never printed red on white... we printed on brown paper...thats why it looks pharmacy nowmoamoa
- < in this examplemoamoa
- aaaaaahdigdre
- Nairn0
From a distance, I think it'll look like "ctrosoplre'e", or something.
There doesn't appear to be much consistency between the letter forms - why, for instance, do you have those details on the t and the r? Why have you split the h in two?
What do the details you've employed represent? What's the logic behind them (and, by extension, across the form)?
For a start, I'd shunt out each letter and size them so they all match or complement each other - the curves in the m and the height of the s are completely out of sync with the rest of the form. Once you've got approximately-matched letters, then work on the integration between them.
Personally, I feel that you'd be better off with very clean letters and perhaps only one or two quirky details/joins across the word - at the moment, there's just too much clashing detail, and I can't see what it all adds.
- In short - less is more.
:)Nairn - lol
i understand what u mean thoWeLoveNoise
- In short - less is more.
- WeLoveNoise0
prob just something different tbh
this was my first idea and to be fair i havent really sketched it on paper first so wasnt sure it was gona work in the first placewill take the hint nairn and use simple type with "quirky detail "