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Out of context: Reply #10

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  • Nairn0

    From a distance, I think it'll look like "ctrosoplre'e", or something.

    There doesn't appear to be much consistency between the letter forms - why, for instance, do you have those details on the t and the r? Why have you split the h in two?

    What do the details you've employed represent? What's the logic behind them (and, by extension, across the form)?

    For a start, I'd shunt out each letter and size them so they all match or complement each other - the curves in the m and the height of the s are completely out of sync with the rest of the form. Once you've got approximately-matched letters, then work on the integration between them.

    Personally, I feel that you'd be better off with very clean letters and perhaps only one or two quirky details/joins across the word - at the moment, there's just too much clashing detail, and I can't see what it all adds.

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