Logo Crit
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- WhiteFace0
Thanks all for your constructive input. I'm taking it back to the drawing board. I'll re-post once i've made progress.
- skt0
yeah, getting worse trying to force the ypc. 1 is still the nicest, but needs a bigger gap between segments.
- chossy0
The first one was ok, but I didn't like the type, I do also think it is a bit much to ask to read ypc out of it. Great start yo!.
- set0
Your direction has gone steadily downhill, number one is the best.
I quite like it, but I think it'd work better if the lines were all the same weight / bars were all the same thickness
- Nairn0
I liked the vagueness of your original #1 & 3. The first thing I thought was "oh, look - it's the choir from above - nice".
I like logos that work as forms in their own right - if I can then realise there's a legitimate hidden meaning after initial exposure, then more's the better.
If you go down the route of making it obvious that it spells out YPC, you may as well just use the bloody letters.
So, for me, #1 or 3 - but work on making them look a little less techie - a little less contrived, a little less like a simply shaded 3d form.
But, wer, good work.
- WhiteFace0
- make the C fatter,
colours look pretty.. Africa-ishdigdre - I agree, I was thinking Jamaica, which isn't really what i'm after :)WhiteFace
- add some red for jamaica :plol
stick ith the first colourscheme, (page1)digdre - still, a no.akrokdesign
- make the C fatter,
- caoimh0
- haha, i actually tried this earlyer. The yorkshire rose colours looked wank IMO. I'm working on two other concepts involving the rose which i'll post soon.WhiteFace
- ...involving the rose which I may post later.WhiteFace
- ok...but i liked the chunkier version - nr. 2. I think the 'thinned' out version weakens the mark. The yellow is awful alright :)caoimh
- roundabout0
What the Icon supposed to represent?
- go to page 1WhiteFace
- I see YPC. Sorry does not work for me.roundabout
- WhiteFace0
- nodigdre
- i think that it looks MUCH better, have you tried dropping the p down so its a descender on the y too?Spanna
- no, no.akrokdesign
- Jnr_Madison0
ya, I think it's a bit of a reach to say it represents YPC.
- I did have small decenders on the Y and P but then it no longer looked like the stands.WhiteFace
- Spanna0
I like the first one. I was trying to see a marque that was someone, open mouthed with hands outstretched, like they were singing in a choir, but it wasn't there...
I think you need to balance the marque and the words better.
- menos0
and i agree w/ digdre, to avoid this, the white space should be bigger..
- fodcj0
1st
- menos0
hmm regarding it representing a YPC... i think it's a bit far fetched. only trying hard to make it seem so can i see a possible y in there... the p also..
- tenpointtwo0
The type is ok, but I don't think the logo works.
- Alu0
1st one is good, but looks like the white space needs to be increased as it may fill in when printed
- WeLoveNoise0
nice 1st one is best
- Jnr_Madison0
What does the mark represent?