Criticism (again)
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- jeveritt0
keep on refining it. you'll get there one day!
- uncle_helv0
You should turn your site into a clock, tick tock,BOOM!
- hahah. and you are normally one of the nice ones on here.********
- Hey I tried skt, but the lad has no manners, he pretty much called me a w*nker when I was giving him an honest critique...uncle_helv
- ...so f*ck him!uncle_helv
- these scottish cunts ah, nae fucking manners.********
- hahah. and you are normally one of the nice ones on here.
- ********0
why do portfolios like this always have at least one piece of work for a christian organisation?
- vanilla_cam0
GORADIO...
i hardly know what i'm doing either. keep plugging away. that's the beauty of this industry is you can always stand to learn something. if you enjoy doing it and can make some money at the same time, then who really cares?
keep refining. you're young.
- ********0
to blog or not to blog...
that is the question?
- ukit0
Rusty orange and brown is probably the worst color combo that exists.
- uncle_helv0
I don't really see much improvement, yes the site looks better than last week, but unfortunately that is no mean feat!
I can't honestly say anything positive about the work, as I don't see how, other than starting again, or take it down. the typeface, isn't a typeface! the Cinderella thing is probably the best thing on there, but that's like me saying Gary Glitter is my favourite paedophile.
Sorry to sound so brutal GORADIO, but you have do have youth on your side, and I'm sure you will learn and get better, but from a design point of view I have to agree with moamoa, this doesn't feel like design!
- you don't see much improvement???!!! Man, if you weren't so handsome, i'd slap you for that. xkuzzAAAAM
- moamoa0
haaa I see.. I am not the only nitch here
- Fariska0
Give the boy a break. I'd like to see everyone else work at 19 year old. He's going to uni soon, he will learn. In the meantime he's trying and he's doing pretty well. He doesn't have any solid or outstanding work, but is fair enough. As far as the work isn't compromising is a good start. He can always put on his uni projects. In the meantime he's learning one of the most difficult things: self-promotion
- Fair enough, but if you ask for a crit on an open forum, then I should be allowed to express my opinion, what he does with it is entirely up to him!uncle_helv
- ...is entirely up to him!uncle_helv
- Redmond0
I think some sort of seperators between projects would be nice.
- Soler0
orange does not work as a background to the work. try white or black - something neutral
- ********0
... AND PICK A FIRST NAME, GODDAMMIT!
- matt310
dude i would recommend design school
- Redmond0
You think because Radiohead and NIN have done internet releases before the album, other bands can't?? -__-
- Stylus0
Damn teenagers and their rock n roll music