Website/work feedback Aug 14, 08
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- falguni
Was hoping to get some feedback on work generated at grad school
- ********0
i like it, go for it, but tweak a type a little.
- detritus0
Cool. Good luck.
- zerocool0
Looks good
- ********0
maybe remove the arrow in the logo?
- ********0
- ********0
i also dont think you need that intro
- ********0
its okay i guess. clean... sort of bland
- 7point340
remove arrow, at least... or the intro altogether
like Dinky says
- ********0
seems gappy to me, too much space between everything on the page.
- falguni0
I need more feedback. Is the digital work strong enough to be a part of the site?
- soynutz70
the animation on the site is a bit stiff, just a small detail. works cool
- detritus0
I like the way you've deployed your icons on the landing page - like colourful Asian tiles, or something - it's a shame that feeling's not somehow part of the main site, which is a bit spartan.
I'd appreciate it if your nav anims ran just a little quicker - I feel like I'm having my [evidently precious] time wasted.
Is your work all school-project driven? A lot of it certainly doesn't look like it is - if so, you should probably mention that on-site somewhere, probably alongside each project.
Your digital section is a bit weak though - perhaps if I was able to see the dynamic nature of those pieces running my opinion might change.
Good work, guy.
- lvl_130
what everyone else said, and maybe eliminate a click between choosing what you want to see...and then actually seeing it. the boxes of mystery meat could almost read better as simple text links (in my opinion).
nice work within the portfolio though.
- Mmm.. Yeah, I meant to pick up on the mystery-meat nav, which always annoys me.detritus
- falguni0
Was hoping to get some feedback on work generated at grad school.
www.falgunishah.com