Logo Crit
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- tymeframe0
#2's mark is definitely the most memorable. I'd love to see you post it with gramme's type suggestions.
The detail in the waves might need simplifying for reproduction and usage purposes... but still it looks super cool :)
- kona0
1: a vagina? super nice but work on the vagina.
2: you put storks in your coffee? super hot detail on the waves but how will that translate small? the stork looks like an afterthought.
3: not getting it.
4: nice. real nice. tweek the txt on the curve just a bit though.
5: not so much.
- dirtydesign0
I'm diggin 2 and 4. Type's not there yet though.
- detritus0
#2 with cross-hatched waves, not that antique clip art you've strangely chosen to employ.
I'm going to go against the grain and suggest that I quite like the direction #5 is going in. I think it needs quite a bit of work still, but I dig the retro west-coast feel [I assume] it's going for. I guess this one's heavily dependent on ultimate deployment - it's a bit hard to appreciate in this stark context.
I'd like to see a version of #1 that has slightly hexagonal background blocks for the text (like old motel/petrol signage?).
#3 simply doesn't work for me.
#4 is yawn-inducing and generic.