website crit
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- leftwave
hello!
i'm making a website for a company that produces custom goody bags for kid's parties.
besides for the seamless background that isn't tiling properly (i'll fix this when i build the site out), what do you think of this so far?
- ukit0
It's fun, I like it. But I don't think the background is necessary. It makes it look more like a giant ad than a website.
- dbloc0
colors are a little bland for a kids site.
- lvl_130
it looks nice. not much of a critique, but i got to run so i'll just keep it simple :)
- dirtydesign0
play down the pattern, possibly use the blues.
or lose it.
- 7point340
its not repeating very well... fix it or rethink it.
the background that is
- madirish0
that feels like a pretty poorly designed website, in all honesty. :(
the background feels very scattered and I still think your typography needs work, purely for the fact there are 5 treatments of different typefaces on a page with less than 50 words of copy.
- Josev0
yeah, I think it's fun but the red background is competing with the main content and navigation.
- creative-0
You have to ask yourself: hat would Pedobear think?
- jevad0
What dbloc and madirish..oh well what everyone else said really. Colours, imagery and typography are all terribly flat and uninspiring for a website of this nature...
- NONEIS0
Hate to point this out, but it looks like a Band-Aid :|
- ke_pmk300
The colors need to be pumped up a bit.
It reminds me of storks.
- ********0
Overall nice, here is what i would do:
1. Remove the Christmas gift titles background
2. Saturate the color palette
3. Simply your font selection
