Critique Please
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- letters20
So, Presbyterian's don't accept spanish or portuguese folks - got it.
just kidding. I'm just giving you a hard time - I understand your connotation with the typeface. :)
- epete220
why are there so many?
- gramme0
Um, because I had ideas?
- gramme0
Round Two.
They've selected a concept, thankfully the best idea won. Now we're working on typographic variations. Meeting tomorrow morning. My favorite is #1 but tell me what you guys think. We'd like to be able to use the mark with and without the logotype, with and without the mark k/o in an oval container. I like the detail on #1 (vs. #2) but am worried about how it holds up small.
Open to thoughts/suggestions etc...Also I've been kerning like a madman and now my eyes hurt, so feedback there would be helpful as well.
- 7point340
#1
don't over think.
you put it as #1 for a reason
- dirtydesign0
7 has a good feel to it.
I don't like the stacked type in #1, but thats being explored...
- Jnr_Madison0
Well I like #1 also. Nice work.
- Well, you see, gramme, currently I am enjoying being grounded in my room...capsize
- epete220
#7 is the winner. It has best contrast between thick and thin
- ukit0
Hmmm, I like 7 as well. It has the most pared down feel to it, which makes it seem more serious and spiritual.
- gramme0
Now if only that eagle-eyed Spookytim would weigh in, I'd be set for Sunday.
- gramme0
And Rand, of course.
- gramme0
bump
- gramme0
POW
- janne760
3D is hot!
- gramme0
Janne we're now on round two. A concept has been picked but now dealing w/ typographic variations.
- locustsloth0
i like 6 best. Where the type of each word is all caps ands all the same size (1-5), "OAKS" doesn't even look like a word, it just looks odd. i like 6 over 7 because the serifs on the capital T slant down, drawing you down to the rest of he type, rather than 7, which directs my eye to the side. If it weren't for that fact, i'd say 7.
- Llyod0
a lot of those look too goth
- dog_opus0
I like 2 and 5 best. Very good work, and good for you for doing this for your church. Good design is goodwill.