corporate ID crit
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- leftwave
hello,
i'm working on a logo and biz card design for a draftsman with a small startup company.
have a look and let me know your thoughts?
http://leftwave.com/indevelopmen…thanks!
- dirtydesign0
Are you stuck on the red rounded square?
They look unfinished to me, needs more exploration.
- VectorMasked0
def an improvement from what I saw on their site, but I am still not feeling it man.
logo ain't working for me. kinda weak.
+1 for the lovely scala.
I think instead of a that light green, a dark green with white text would have more impact on the b card.
- ukit0
The one you have on the first page looks like a pair of glasses, not sure if that's intentional or not.
- madirish0
i love leftwave ID threads!!
how you doing lady?!? : )
- doesnotexist0
I'm not feeling any of the square marks. I would ditch them personally, maybe just make it a typeface with a special touch of something...
- moamoa0
1. try again, those scribbles are not good
2. its not corporate ID its a logo and a business card layout- 2 1/2 - it could be stationary set, if you add a envelope and letterhead.akrokdesign
- i'm getting there - this is just a starting point. thanks for reminding me that i have no idea what this is called
leftwave
- akrokdesign0
3. the "pq" symbol ain't adding anything. its lost on the right side.
- jfletcher0
The P and Q look out of place, especially the decending stroke on the Q. The box with the P/Q treated more visually feels uneasy, there is some tension that needs to be resolved in spacing and having the layout pull you out of the box.
- akrokdesign0
4. if the client is okay with it. as he do not have a real address. keep it short and sweet instead. p.o. box instead of post office box
- yes, use normal mailing standards when writing addresses/contact info.doesnotexist
- akrokdesign0
5. why the color red? wine red? what the reason behind the color choice.
- ukit0
6. It's kinda boring. Spice it up!!!
- leftwave0
thanks for the great and quick feedback. you guys are the best!
sorry - should have mentioned that the current logo is in a red box and client wants to keep that part....
- akrokdesign0
then how about using the box as the focal point.
- Jnr_Madison0
Surprised you haven't worked on a safety pin idea with those letters.
- antigirl0
start over.
:(
- Knuckleberry0
i dont like it
- ********0
cadet: permission to gouge out my eyes, sir!
sir: permission granted.