late night logo crit
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- traut0
not so cutting edge.
nice clean type though.
- tymeframe0
It's for a vinyl signage start up thing
- PonyBoy0
feels mom & pop "I had my nephew do this... isn't it greeeat?"-ish....
... start-ups don't have to feel like start-ups...
kernings stinks... margins are... odd... nothing really lines up... you hacked of an edge of 'edge'... that's probably the first thing you see in a DIY design book... nothing original about that...
:( sorry s'not so positve
- univers0
My initial response is that there isn't enough contrast, I think this could aid to the idea that it doesn't feel finished. It feels gray and the style choices don't feel committed. As for me I have to dive into my informational design books, and if I think up some solutions you can try I will shoot them here.
- Antonelli0
any logo with a company name that includes "cutting edge" is just going to look like shit. i hate cliché names like that.
- univers0
Hehe look what I found.
- tymeframe0
I think you guys are a bit caught up in the name....not the logo. any other feedback?
- _salisae_0
Your type needs work. Look at other logos done strictly with type and notice the differences. We can't feedback a good eye for typography into you unfortunately.
- +1akrokdesign
- -1. back to where you started.Antonelli
- sorry. i'll go to bed now..Antonelli
- hah.akrokdesign
- ukit0
I thought pony boy's typography did the trick
- univers0
ponyboy should enter that logo into the Photoshop wars! WoW Brilliant.
- ETM0
- bulletfactory0
let's see some of the other directions you took this.