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- takesthingsapart0
Please leave comments. Thank you!
- creative-0
FAIL
- (you missed off .com/.co.uk/.net etc)creative-
- Thanks. I think we got off on the wrong foot.takesthingsapart
- ********0
creative,
good thing you're on call here... the pace is abit slow as compared to the weekdays. good to know you're keeping the n00bs in line on a saturday ;p
- ********0
takes,
you got some nice work but why are you using frames on your site? saw that and nearly shit- designers at agencies oftentimes don't know a line of code/scriptLlyod
- Llyod0
put predatory paper 1 or 2 on you experimental section it should that you can follow through to conception. btw "professional" should be experimental.
An snooty art school faggot would say that you understand how to use color. The truth though is just this: You like to use color.
- Drno0
you have a huge typo in your CV, if you're looking for work,
your curriculum should be spotless,
also if you can, get your own domain, because you some great work up but .mac is a big no for me, plus sub directories allow weird people to pick into your life
- takesthingsapart0
Thanks for the crit! Will fix!
- detritus0
It's all very small and reminiscent of pre-millenial sites, when they were still into pixel fonts keeping widths inside a 780 width. Now, I couldn't really care less - you can do what you like, but if you want me to actually appreciate your work, I'd suggest making it so I don't need to squint so much. This goes especially for the intra-section nav and description - why on Gaia's sweet belly is it so itsybitsyteenieweenie and entrenched on the bottom of the nav side?
Personally, I'd take all the graphics out of the site - all the border=1 frames, all the compressed text and pixel icons - throw them out. Start from scratch, enlarge your images, get some readable flow to the page - nav in one section, content and descriptions in another - make it so that I don't have to think at all.
Also, I think you should be a bit more brutish in your choice of work - some pieces (I'm looking at you, 'currency' & 'positive response') do nothing but detract from the rest.
There's something about that Joan Bishop piece I really like - did you do the background yourself?
And please, I need to know moer about this 'Jewtopia' - that sounds like a lot of fun!
- "start from scratch". Hmm. Sorry, I don't think I intended to be that harsh..detritus
- No sweat, bring out the teeth!takesthingsapart
- takesthingsapart0
Thanks for the comments detritus. The background on the Joan card is appropriated from and old book. Gorgeous though, right?
Jewtopia is based on an off Broadway play by two guys poking fun at their own Jewish upbringing and culture. We worked out of their NY apartment slaving to meet deadlines and make the book as crass and nutty as we could. I think it achieved that. Worth a glance at your local Barnes & Noble.
- czawada0
Your site is down.
- takesthingsapart0
In the mean time...
http://homepage.mac.com/ralphb/t…
- menos0
is it just me or...
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