logo crit please
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- leftwave
i'm redesigning a logo for a property auction company. client wants to keep the gavel concept from the original logo. check out:
http://leftwave.com/nt/logos1.pd…
please share your feedback with me... thanks!
- menos0
i kinda like 1, 4, 5... but it needs a bit more work...
- ukit0
I don't think the juxtaposition in 4,5,6 is a good idea - it looks like the gavel is smashing the house:)
What's the goal of the redesign?
- agree. sorry.
Andy_ssw - i also agree. i think you have some concepts that could work.studderine
- agree. sorry.
- menos0
What ukit said. There's something there but it's not quite there...
- forcetwelve0
5. the rest look out of balance to me.
- akrokdesign0
no. 5 is the better one
- jevad0
Um...they are all really flat and uninspiring to be quite honest. I'd suggest doing a lot more type exploration and definitely some sketches with the gavel to see where else you can take it - because none of these approaches are working.
- drgs0
They are no better than the original
Esp nr 3 and all below where gravel beats on the house (!) are the funniest
- trooper0
3 is the nicest and looks like a monkey hasnt designed it.
mark
- NickW0
I had a very similar project last year, Started with the concept of using arrows to represet the movements of the auction. I wasn't keen on incorporting the gavel but the client was adamant.
Definitely avoid the gavel smashing up the house!
- rip off the font choice here ;-)invisiblechamber
- No, don't.jevad
- Oh my goodness.non
- neue75_bold0
"Give us your shit or we'll destroy your home"
- invisiblechamber0
letter replacement with objects - better not. allthough in the green one her it's well done. also yes: avoid any smashing. how about putting the words one under the other and place the gavel next to that column..
neat idea in the original about hammering the usa red.
- ********0
4 or 5, but they still need some work. Lots of it. :)
- kelpie0
3. but I'd drop the gavel below the baseline and develop it a bit more.
Have to reiterate that house destroying giant hammer is NOT a cool USP for this company ;)