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- coco_ono
Okay...so there is still some finessing left, but I would appreciate any comments, suggestions on the Kornerstone Ranch packaging design.
The idea of the peafowl is based off a woman working at home and managing a peafowl farm in northern michigan. crazy, eh?
thanks! much love.
d.
- edd-e0
i got thrown off by all the links... to other sites.
- coco_ono0
yeah...that's for AFTER you judge my work ;)
- edd-e0
im not in the right head set to be judge...
- coco_ono0
well then i hope you're enoying those links, then
- detritus0
I've seen your site a couple of times over the past wee while and your work just gets better and better - I really like your style. It's just a shame that the site itself doesn't express it more.
- coco_ono0
yeah, i am currently working on a website.
still juggling between flash and basic html. nothing too fancy though. i ain't 'bouts that :)
thanks though, detritus.
- OSFA0
I agree with Mr. detritus. Very nice work.
Great job with the subtle color combinations
- MrOneHundred0
Nice, clean style. Some odd alignments in the Kornerstone ranch packaging (or so it seems). Great subtle colour choices.
But who am I to judge?
- ukit0
I like some of it. Not so crazy about the floating dots movie or the pieces at the end. Seems like it will all show better once you have a real site up, the Blogger logo and type, outlines around images, etc. detract from the work IMO.
- OSFA0
^ yup, get rid of the pattern
- a_iver0
I love it! Another Minneapolian, haha! I like it very much. Not sure whether or not I like the typeface in the paragraph, but the image is too small to tell for sure. I also kind of want the caps on the cover not to be itallic. Good job!
- I changed my mind, I do like the itallic caps, maybe just kern it a littlea_iver
- monNom0
You're much too tall
- coco_ono0
it's those Wheaties...
- DUKIE08220
I think you need to check your rags, and work on your leading...most of your type settings look to be a rush job, yet they really affect the overall look and feel of your work
- Rand0
I think it's lovely
- uncle_helv0
Some nice bits on there, but a question do you have permission to use those polaroids...?
http://www.flickr.com/photos/gra…
- Ampersanderson0
clean up the vector bird shape. could be much more realistic.
- you forgot yr irony symbol, ampersandersonRand
- *snapAmpersanderson
- dibec0
beautiful work. totally a style I respect. keep on trucking.
- blingy0
Ripping ain't cool