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- cls0
I like 3, but perhaps ease down the raster effect.
- Raniator0
3 has something, but it's too harsh at the moment.
- elms0
the image used there is so low-quality, so that's why the raster effect
- Typehead0
I agree, number 3 is the strongest. All depends on the audience you're wanting to appeal to I suppose?
- Complexfruit0
#3
this is just me but, 1 and 2 reminds me a little too much of propoganda posters
- elms0
#3
this is just me but, 1 and 2 reminds me a little too much of propoganda posters
Complexfruit
(Oct 3 07, 00:52because the use of black/red?
- Complexfruit0
because the use of black/red?
elms
(Oct 3 07, 00:53)That and the high contrast of the Beethoven image...
- designerror0
if you changed the red on the guy to gray like the background, it would tone it down a bit in #1
- OBBTKN0
I like 1.
But i´ll correct the left text alignement.
Makes something rare visually...(or is it´s purpose?).
- OBBTKN0
i would
- phatlee0
1 is more suiting, but not sure of the background. Keep the colours though...
Like the technique in 3 but maybe too contemporary for this sort of thing?
- elms0
- elms0
But i´ll correct the left text alignement.
Makes something rare visually...(or is it´s purpose?).
OBBTKN
(Oct 3 07, 01:03)yes, i have to correct that
- designerror0
much better!
- elms0
Like the technique in 3 but maybe too contemporary for this sort of thing?
phatlee
(Oct 3 07, 01:06)that's what im thinking also.
- phatlee0
your amended version is much nicer...
- Complexfruit0
looking good elms
- max_prophet0
I don't know what it says, but the first line under Beethoven looks unbalanced the way it drags over the entire width and then just those three words, I assume they are names (?) cant you break that better?
PLus I see no reason for his pic to be so small, he could be enlarged quite a bit so his hair is under the beethoven or that second line. you seem scared to overlap the sacred beethoven, but you've treated him as background anyhow, you need to pack more punch in there.
All that gubbins at the bottom looks very cramped up, what's that all about? I assume the date is very important but that's kind lost there
I think you need to look at your work in more detail and push harder, this is like a first draft imo
- max_prophet0
his face man, let's see his face nobody gives a shit about his shoulder.
- elms0
good advice, max_prophet
(those little things there at the bottom are sponsor logos :/ )