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• max_prophet0

  I don't know what it says, but the first line under Beethoven looks unbalanced the way it drags over the entire width and then just those three words, I assume they are names (?) cant you break that better?

  PLus I see no reason for his pic to be so small, he could be enlarged quite a bit so his hair is under the beethoven or that second line. you seem scared to overlap the sacred beethoven, but you've treated him as background anyhow, you need to pack more punch in there.

  All that gubbins at the bottom looks very cramped up, what's that all about? I assume the date is very important but that's kind lost there

  I think you need to look at your work in more detail and push harder, this is like a first draft imo

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