skullptor
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I know people have posted about him before, but his stories are shit and his writing is terrible. For example:
"Nobody in Force City wanted to think about the consequences of Chaz Warren’s not being a cop anymore."
It is the most awkward thing I have ever read.
- e-pill0
ignore...
- Jaline0
I do agree about that sentence being awkward, but I'd have to read more to form a real opinion.
- honest0
I'm no writer and everybody in their own right is a critic, but even if his stuff is a right old literary masturbation, I think it's good that creative writing is represented on this site.
Not all the stuff posted here is great designwise, but since writing is less visual than fancy graphics and artful visuals it doesn't stand a chance when placed on a forum where people go to seek creative distraction.
Nice try skullptor whomever you are, but you will need to raise your bar. If anything, i challenge more writers to submit. If art, music and design are represented here, why not creative writing.
Copywriters of the world unite!
- Jaline0
Clearly like the women, but I'm not sure if it's good enough to not be considered sexist. Unless I'm way off.
- Jaline0
but I do love Joseph Gordon Levitt, and appreciate the link by you in the PBS to his personal site, which contained this little gem:
http://www.hitrecord.org/picture…
- Crouwel0
..and chaos ensued in Force City.
- JerseyRaindog0
I post my short stories in a literary forum.
Most of the time this is an illiterate forum.
- skt0
i are talk proper. thanks.
- skt0
0 diggs.
- JerseyRaindog0
i are talk proper. thanks.
skt
(Apr 15 07, 00:03)lol.
- honest0
ah dinnae ken ya radge cont
- emecks0
I'm no writer and everybody in their own right is a critic, but even if his stuff is a right old literary masturbation, I think it's good that creative writing is represented on this site.
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honest
(Apr 14 07, 07:47)"Chick Magnet
When she suggested sex he was surprised.""Chocolate Seduction
The attraction was purely sexual...""Wristcutter’s Ballet
...an animated conversation is better than just-lying-there sex.""Cross Roots
Catholic chicks are easy.""Saying Goodbye
Their kiss was the stuff of romance novels and soft porn.""Behind The Veil
Thinking of her as a statue helped him get comfortable with the fact that she was completely naked.""Hard To Do
He liked to think of it as the price he paid for amazing sex.""Mr. Hand
...the women were fully clothed one moment and completely naked the next.""The Driver
They would live and work together, suffer break downs, have inappropriate sex and fight a lot.""Nun Of Your Business
Is it wrong that I can’t stop thinking of sex right now?"masturbation indeed.
- st33d0
"He fapped like ceiling cat was his new attic lodger"