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- Complexfruit0
Move "New York City" from the header to your contact info you darn Brooklynite ;)
Uptown Canine, Ltd. is your strongest piece, I would move it to the top of the list.
just my 2 cents...
- OSFA0
at least u got shoes on one of them...
- studderine0
that nike poster is sweet.
- sander0
lol @ OSFA
- OSFA0
I think you are missing something fundamental in order to showcase your work.
INCLUDE PICS OF YOUR SHOES NEXT TO IT!!
Damn, I thought everybody was aware of the trend....
nice work.
- skt0
you are a bit all over the place at the moment. the 3d grey box, the flowers, the bird, the type used in the main nav. None of it really seems to gell.
As you have some quite nice work, I would remove as much decoration from the site as possible and just let the work speak for itself.
- mandomafioso0
Thanks Jox! Sander, no worries, I think you make some good points.
- sander0
ps, i just realized that sounded pretty harsh... there is some nice work... i like the photos too
- jox0
That Uptown box is gorgeous!!
- sander0
few things:
1) header - drop shadows. lose them.
2) background - that pattern is not doing much for me. a little too busy.
3) try moving the bird logo to the left of your name?
4) new york city is unnecessary
5) your divider gif has an extra black pixel on the right side. plus it looks a little strange... maybe try one that extends nearly across the page? or grey dots... dots with more spacing?
6) not digging the grunge font on the section nav. too hard to read. also the black bar that tells you where you are is way too heavy.
7) why are clients' names set in Verdana? seems grossly incongruous while everything else is set in Serif fonts. Pick a nice font and use sIRF (google it)
8) "top" button link should have an arrow pointing up? not anonymous dots.
9) put a form on your contact page. add a link to your CV/Resumé.
hope this helps
- robotron3k0
works nicely on firefox, love the photography, you might consider rethinking the typography to make less unique and more consistent, just to keep it a tiny bit less distracting so as to focus on the work itself. also, maybe remove the myspace link under "other" and put your resume info there...
- k0na_an0k0
too late... *melts mind
- mandomafioso0
hehe, oops. http://www.muymichael.com
- k0na_an0k0
Damnit mandomafioso hold still. I'm trying to do the Vulcan Mind Meld with you so I can retrieve the link.
I can't do this shit if you're moving around.
- skt0
GIMME THE FUCKING LINK!!!
- mandomafioso
I just updated my site with some new work and CSS goodness. Please let me know what you think of it on the whole. Also if there are any browser-specific issues. Cheers!