logo critique
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- OSFA0
knew we should have got someone in to do it :)
lw-d
(Mar 27 07, 07:02)nah man, just work on it.
- spendogg0
mos def round everthing out, it would feel much nicer without the hard edges.
- lw-d0
OSFA - cheers fella. First day of working on it, will stick with it :)
- OSFA0
then you still have a few loooong nights ahead. Good luck and let us know when u have it...
- lw-d0
When you say round it out, are we talking about the flat edges I have on the top of b, l and d?
Lee
- lw-d0
I will keep you posted, thanks.
- dyspl0
did I mention that I part own the company.... nightmare, knew we should have got someone in to do it :)
oooh... knowing this, I'd say take a breath and do a brief, really :)
otherwise everything will turn into "I want that to be sooo cool" and that way every thing you can do can work -or not-.
It's like doing your own portfolio : if don't think about what you want to show, what the whole thing is supposed to mean etc... you're just about doing tons of layouts....
- Concrete0
Conceptually its ok. Just needs some refinement. I would only use the circle in the 'e' to differentiate it from the other letters.
- version30
When you say round it out, are we talking about the flat edges I have on the top of b, l and d?
Lee
lw-d
(Mar 27 07, 07:08)that's what i was referring to
as far as the size of the dot, just shrink it to the same width as the strokes.
the e is showing a problem though as the curvature seems out of whack
- lw-d0
good point dyspl. My initial thought was to keep it clean, simple and coherent (is that the right word, probably not :)
The changes people have suggested here are really helping it along though...
- lw-d0
thanks for the feedback, version5, the e was difficult for me to do, thought I had it nailed, could you let me know where you see the problem.
Thanks
- gramme0
make it out of ribbons, take a clear snapshot, scan, refine in Illy.
Or make a suite of logotypes created from continuous materials: rope, string, licorice, metal chain, whatever
- johndiggity0
when i think blend i think of fluidity and movement.
the logo you've got is segmented and a little too rigid, despite the curves. i'd start over.
- grunttt0
i see where you were going with the sketch and i think the concept it pretty good (with the sketch). it was lost in translation though.
as for the inital logos posted i prefer the ones with the 3 boobies as opposed to the one with the single boobie.
- version30
i'm seeing your problem
this is my rough draft, i like the roundness, your e isn't a true circle, its deformed was all i was getting at
- blastofv0
v5 - nice clean up of his original concept. that looks like the way to go.
- ********0
close to bland, why risk it?
- version30
why risk it?
xenicon
(Mar 27 07, 11:55)you're right orville, we should just stay on the ground
- _salisae_0
close to bland, why risk it?
xenicon
(Mar 27 07, 11:55)i'd separate the b and l and just go ahead and change the company name to bellend
- ********0
"I'm with the bland"