crit my SWF
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- jysta
OK guys,
Constructive criticism,
my first proper flash piece for web.
Would greatly appreciate your feedback and suggestions..
- mimeartist0
click here and it doesn't
- kinetic0
ditto
- jharbort0
i think the background needs something more ... perhaps light horiz/vert lines?
not sure if the reflection works on 'optimise' ... because of the 'p'
good start though.
p.s. http://www.jystdesign.co.uk/ is an 'Untitled Document'
- jysta0
The click here will go to the specific web-page on the main site.
Maybe it's too short to present to client atm. :-/
I could do another scene for each option with brief summary of benefit etc???
- canuck0
Yes. more.
Yeah, I would do away with the reflection thing. It doesnt really work, and it seems inconsistant.
Also the copy font seems too fuzy.
Is this going to be a flash element within a page?
- jysta0
Iv done the text in Flash8 with alias for readability.
It's supposed to be an intro before you go into the main website so you get directed to the relevant pages (i.e SoHo or Business).
Its not going to be a header. I think im going to keep the main pages as HTML.
- jysta0
Thanks for the feedback guys,
implemented a few changes, im going to add another scene for sure, keep you posted when I do.
- UndoUndo0
isnt SoHo - small office home office?
you have it the other way round
- jharbort0
looks better w/out the reflection.. and the light blues instead of the black on the briefcase/phone symbols
good job
- TResudek0
Runs choppy on Firefox/OSX. What is the frame rate?
TR
- jysta0
12/14fps, how do i make it less choppy???
- TResudek0
Bump that up to 31 or 40 fps for starters
TR