crit: logo for school project
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- Jaline0
So it's "matter"?
Looks interesting so far.
- Complexfruit0
Be careful, the bottom half is starting to read like a mask or as a veil to me.
- Nairn0
imo, i'd be settling on a font choice soon as it is already having an affect on how your logoform should look.
With this font, for instance, i'd make the logo less hard, less straight and rigid - basically, more handdrawn looking.
If, however, you moved to something like a rounded san-serif, the cleanliness of your logo wouldn't jar so much.
Personally, I see it as a box - not as a veil or anything, the shading makes that quite clear.
I'm wondering - are his earlobes hurting, squeezed in there like that? :)
- Nairn0
*2 cups of tea later.
Ah. I'm an idiot - 'Mind OVER matter'? as in 1 OVER 2 - aka, ½?
So it's not a guy's head popping out of a box? Of course not! That wouldn't make any sense at all.
Um.. I'd tinker with your logo form a little more.