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- _salisae_0
treat the type in the middle a little nicer and it's good
tho a little on the dark side
- OSFA0
I don't know... a little too busy maybe? =)
- radar0
got milk?
- Jaline0
the black space needs to be cleaned up
- Baskerville0
no jaline that's just all the fingerprints etc being shown up on your monitor ;o)
- Jaline0
you're right, Baskerville
*wipes screen
eh, still needs more cowbell though
- horton0
i think you were probably smoking dope last night and having some prolific thoughts that really aren't all that prolific.
and if you're going to try and pull off a minimal design like this, you're typesetting/ kerning bettre be impeccable, which it is not.
sorry, but this is what i think, and you asked.
- johndiggity0
can't you find a face better expressing emptiness than helvetica?
- mr_snuggles0
why in good gods name would he need a more suiting typeface? Does it not convey the message as is?
I'm not saying the typesetting is very good, but the helvetica actually suits the concept quite well...
- emptyempty0
Thanks for the feedback guys.
Helvetica, i'm in love with (i know).
I'm just going to play it around with different faces to see what i'm going to come up with.
Thanks again ;-)
- Baskerville0
i think you were probably smoking dope last night and having some prolific thoughts that really aren't all that prolific.
horton
(Nov 8 06, 09:21)prolific means producing a lot of something, so his thoughts whether on dope or not, may very well have been prolific as long as there were lots of them.
Maybe you meant profound?
- emptyempty0
I'm not saying the typesetting is very good, but the helvetica actually suits the concept quite well...
mr_snuggles
(Nov 8 06, 09:26)Thats what i thought!
The space around the text is empty, which is pretty much my aim.
- dirtydesign0
a little obvious no?
- dirtydesign0
a little obvious no?
- radar0
maybe get rid of the word empty, then it will be more accurate.
- Baskerville0
woth saying twice
- johndiggity0
do something different.
- horton0
Maybe you meant profound?
Baskerville
(Nov 8 06, 09:29)oh snap.. basker i think you got me there. profound would have been a better word. maybe it was me smoking too much :)
"2 a prolific composer productive, creative, inventive, fertile."
- mr_snuggles0
it would be much more effective if in white and all the type was on the back but reversed so you could read it through the front...
- mr_snuggles0
and printed on newsprint or a super thin stock...