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- jevad0
kern that fucker out
- johndiggity0
desigmojo? give us some context.
- sherman0
maybe all the letters are spooning with huge design mojo
- myobie0
just from my looking at it, the dot for the J just doesn't look right
and yeah, what the other's said
- desmo0
it is supposed to read out 'designmojo'
i guess the n and m is a bit confusing
- jevad0
work more on teh S, I and G
- johndiggity0
the concept is pretty tired, and besides that, it's been executed much better. try a different direction.
- tenpointtwo0
I like it, I just think you need to pay more attention to the details. Why are some edges straight and some rounded? Why do the dots curve so much for the "i" but not for the "j"?
I think it's a great start but needs a push of refinement to get it looking sharp instead of gimmicky.
- desmo0
awesome. thanks guys
- kyl30
lol @ geocities
- desmo0
geocities is old school my friend.
- horton0
i'd fix the "esi"..
1/ horizontal bar on the e, not angled.
2/ s is really hard to read. size doesn't match-up.. raise above baseline, possibly flow into i.
3/ dot on i has no purpose bent link so.. i'd match the j and d.
thats my 3 cents. take em or leave em.
- horton0
and yeah cap all those ends either round OR straight, but not both.
- dirtydesign0
not my style, reminds me of a RAVE flyer, but well done.
def kern. also i think color can help the N and M issue going on.
- desmo0
yes, i think if i add in some color to the N and M, it will make the 2 letters pop out more.
back to the drawing board for me
- kiwihair0
re: n and m issue. I personally saw it pretty much rightaway that it wan an N and M, but if you get a lot of neg. feedback on those eltters, you can have 'design' be black and 'mojo' can be white with a black stroke for when you need it B&W
also, what everyone else said. that s needs work, the end DEF need work