Logo critique
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- _salisae_0
:)
- Rand0
I know chéri
- _salisae_0
only teasing, rand.
- Rand0
I'm appallingly arrogant in my humility
- e-pill0
DAFONT:
http://www.dafont.com/theme.php?…just flip thr all the font choices, you have time to still flesh out your idea. i feel your choice of font is off and it can become a strong logo.
- _salisae_0
quit showing off your humility
- Rand0
I defer to others; this isn't within my limited sphere of expertise
- noteri_0
bottom right Hafner is the best one, however, really not feeling the font used on "Hafner."
The bottom Sounds is the best of the three, but you need to do something about the "O" in Sounds.
- blastofv0
Rodzilla – if she's looking to see more of your work, then I'd show her the entire process – sketches, early comps, polished comps, and all of the explorations and experimenting in between. If she's looking at you as a potential hiree, then she'll be just as interested in your thought process (if not more) than in your final batch of logos.
- deletedscene0
aye, shite ma hole mynx.. you were just coming the cunt...
so, what was the point you were going to make that only a designer would understand? were you going to use complicated words like kerning, or serif?
neenawLOL minx u are a CUNT!!!
i would use the original hammer one and try some new fonts with it, u had it incorporated in with the type more it was the best yet??? repost the old one to see!!!!!
- Bite0
maybe try some different fonts, they can still be strong/bold, and maybe some different colour variants. What i try and do is take one or two of my favorite ideas and then really work them up with different colours and fonts then when you are happy you can start to think a bit laterally about it all knowing you have a couple of good ones to show.
- rodzilla0
i have to send them off today. kind of stressing about this. I was given them thursday with no background and I had to work all freaking weekend which gave me no time to work on the logos.
she did not say how many to come up with or anything, just asked to see more of my work. so she gave me two clients' names.
- Jnr_Madison0
Mmm I like the nasty twist to this thread.
- phatlee0
*yawn
- mynx0
i'm always a cunt you rainbow lover. ... and phatlee that's a great photo of your mother, did she win that day?
- blastofv0
Considering you have no background or brief for either logo, it's hard to crit font choices, general look, or conceptual details... so all that's left is the typography, which needs detail work. The kerning in general is inconcsistent – I would go through and get super detailed with your spacing. Also, the weights are unbalanced between the 'voices+life' vs. the 'of'.
How many do you need to show by the way? I'd try to lock in to your strongest one or two for each, and leave the rest off the table.
- neenaw0
aye, shite ma hole mynx.. you were just coming the cunt...
so, what was the point you were going to make that only a designer would understand? were you going to use complicated words like kerning, or serif?
- _salisae_0
sounds of life:
the bottom one is working .. but make the sound wave graphic match the curve of the o. also .. when the logo reduces in size the italicized words will disappear. the layout of the words aren't really balanced anyway. play with the form of it some.
much better than the other day!
- mynx0
...about as many people as it takes to chuck some gay colours on an old police officer i'd say. now back in your hole neenaw.
my reason for asking whether he was a designer or not was to adjust my feedback accordingly. no point in talking about things if he doesnt understand them.