Logo critique
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- Rand0
I love you
too tired/sad/drunk for critique, though
- rodzilla0
ya i know its the weekend....
- Mojo0
The H logo with the hammer head on it is the best, but the text under isn't great.
- fresnobob0
ywah man, your type is all out of wack, nothing lines up and the heirarchy is all wrong
- epill_0
try to use some fonts that will be more translatible to your medium.
...kicks pipe, and looks for a lighter...
- antoine_1010
definatly NOT the ones with the slab serifs. looks like a football team/sports
- foreverwhatever0
i agree, but then, im drunk.
slab serif no
- studderine0
uhh..dude..
- mynx0
Um... are you even a designer? no seriously, are you?
- neenaw0
Um... are you even a designer? no seriously, are you?
mynx
(Jul 10 06, 04:02)That helps...
How many people does it take to make a few icons and a shit illustration of a robot by the way?
- deletedscene0
the ones u posted the other day seemed better there was one with the hammer icon that was stronger than these ones....i think!!!
- _salisae_0
hafner:
the bottom right logo is working. make sure the feet of the H and the hammer head are the same thickness. the kerning between the N an the E is much tighter than the rest of the HAFNER word. actually .. just look at the kerning in general with that word.
- mynx0
...about as many people as it takes to chuck some gay colours on an old police officer i'd say. now back in your hole neenaw.
my reason for asking whether he was a designer or not was to adjust my feedback accordingly. no point in talking about things if he doesnt understand them.
- _salisae_0
sounds of life:
the bottom one is working .. but make the sound wave graphic match the curve of the o. also .. when the logo reduces in size the italicized words will disappear. the layout of the words aren't really balanced anyway. play with the form of it some.
much better than the other day!
- neenaw0
aye, shite ma hole mynx.. you were just coming the cunt...
so, what was the point you were going to make that only a designer would understand? were you going to use complicated words like kerning, or serif?
- blastofv0
Considering you have no background or brief for either logo, it's hard to crit font choices, general look, or conceptual details... so all that's left is the typography, which needs detail work. The kerning in general is inconcsistent – I would go through and get super detailed with your spacing. Also, the weights are unbalanced between the 'voices+life' vs. the 'of'.
How many do you need to show by the way? I'd try to lock in to your strongest one or two for each, and leave the rest off the table.
- mynx0
i'm always a cunt you rainbow lover. ... and phatlee that's a great photo of your mother, did she win that day?
- phatlee0
*yawn