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- coco_ono
I made a rough draft of a potential website for myself. Dreaweaver will be used to build this site (not Flash). This is my first attempt on web design...
So I'd like to have the NT'ers feedback.
coco.
- foreverwhatever0
no thumbs!
- e-pill0
when i click on a link i expect full on porn!!!
but all i get is the same image i see that i am clicking on.
- coco_ono0
the porn will come AFTER the feedback. I Promise!
- designerror0
Bart gets an F
- coco_ono0
does it suck that bad?
- GrammaSeff0
you got some sick work
love it
- designerror0
does it suck that bad?
coco_ono
(Jun 27 06, 18:02)no, then it would have been Coco gets an F.
- e-pill0
i would liek some other colour as your background than white.
maybe incorporate the way you design your packages to also use that feel in your site or how your portray yourself.
also market yourself more by maybe having some sort of pricing quoted in there somewhere so you can start a living as a creative.
- e-pill0
also i am not really sure what it is that i am looking at even though you quote what it is...i am refering the the geometric shape image in blue tones at the bottom.
what cut has it made and what is it used for?
- mrpt0
Just a suggestion:
1. Portfolio
2. About/Resume (combined)
3. LinksHave your portolio pg. the first thing people see.
- nosaj0
I really dig the approach. Simple, bold colours.. should show your work nicely.
- _salisae_0
from what i can tell you are good with color and illustration and have a bubbly personality.
- Rand0
didn't I already see a portfolio site a while ago... at which time I really liked your work?
- taragee0
yeah whers that old site? and you mean that top thing is the comp not that you're using blogger as your portfolio right?
- MLP0
nice work... my roommate is in holyl bible. weeeird.
- ldww0
oh yeah, you like it hard. oh shit, wrong forum....
in that case, i love you use of color and the pharm ident is nice. also the one with the bubble over the guy with the mask. yeah, i like them, good work dude.
- rockonski0
looks alright to me. my only advice would be "astonish me"
- coco_ono0
Yes, I mean the protfolio at teh very top of the blog. No I am not using this blog as a portfolio...just a temporary showing of my work in progress.
and MLB, who is your roomate?
- coco_ono0
I meant MLP, not MLB. sorry.