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- smltom
http://70.87.80.226/~sml46/ko/
This is the first site we have done. The music page is inactive. Ko is a new artist so very little content was provided.
- epill_0
Newstoday doesnt allow ip addresses...if you want us to see it and crit it you must use: http://tinyurl.com/
- epill_0
oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo... i lovve the weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...
your tiny url KICKS SO MUCH ASS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
- smltom0
Thanks x 2 e-pill
- blingy0
This looks great for your first site. I think Ko will be happy.
A few random thoughts:-I'm a sucker for sites like this that mimic real life, but it wouldn't hurt to dress it up a little bit with more stylized type treatments in a couple places maybe.
-Since the first page is in Flash, I was kind of expecting the whole site to be in Flash, which could have given you some nice opportunities for animating various elements throughout. Read up on Flash/XML integration - you can have the Flash movie simply read a text file and easily update info like text and images.
-Not a fan of the black background. I think brown or green would better fit the palette.Overall looks good though. Bonus points for the Kamasutra animation:)
- Concrete0
Really good for your first site.
- kelpie0
love the shaggin
- Nairn0
"And so the sweet Lord came down from the heavens and spake - offering tender words of truth and compassion to His struggling flock."
"love the shaggin".
- kelpie0
and ne'er a wiser word was said.