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  • blingy0

    This looks great for your first site. I think Ko will be happy.
    A few random thoughts:

    -I'm a sucker for sites like this that mimic real life, but it wouldn't hurt to dress it up a little bit with more stylized type treatments in a couple places maybe.
    -Since the first page is in Flash, I was kind of expecting the whole site to be in Flash, which could have given you some nice opportunities for animating various elements throughout. Read up on Flash/XML integration - you can have the Flash movie simply read a text file and easily update info like text and images.
    -Not a fan of the black background. I think brown or green would better fit the palette.

    Overall looks good though. Bonus points for the Kamasutra animation:)

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