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- xenicon0
you definitely have a problem with the duplication of "en" Anyone notices that rightaway. The solutions so far aren't working. Why the plusminus ( although I know, I know a plus sign is the sign for graphic designers)it just confuses the wordmark. Plus or minus a letter is kind of clear.
v2 is hard to read and figure out.
This might be a case of going against what is obvious for a simpler solution.
- _salisae_0
more options please
- winter0
what's it for?
- Gucci0
what's the message?
- _salisae_0
it's for a software product. Benten is a japanese name and want it to be simple, a little playful and incorporate some of the calligraphy.
monkeyshine
(May 23 06, 12:13)
- xenicon0
I'd keep the letters on one line, maybe bend em...
- _salisae_0
you want i'll design it for you
- monkeyshine0
thanks, guys. IKEA customer service is looking better and better. :(
- xenicon0
were dutch
- _salisae_0
your site looks really nice . . i think you're stuck in some kind of holding pattern creatively with this one
- monkeyshine0
you're right, salisae. I don't know what my problem is with this one...well, my head has been in wireframe mode for the past month...perhaps that isn't helping. oy.
- _salisae_0
i always thought this was really lame feedback in my classes but here i am passing it on ..... have fun with it!
play with the letterforms .. stop thinking so much about what they do. that will come through intrinsically
- jevad0
play with the letterforms .. stop thinking so much about what they do. that will come through intrinsically
_salisae_
(May 30 06, 13:04)definately - it's really flat at the moment. explore typefaces - colours - letterforms.
Keep pushing. Look at other logos for inspiration and ideas
- winter0
i dont' get the (-) (+). reminds me of type D batteries.
- brooke0
Just copy someone else's.
- _salisae_0
brooke! that's like saying just go to the park and meet a rich guy. he can do this!
i want twenty ideas by tomorrow.
- neue75_bold0
I'd not dismiss the 'copying' comment...
- Jaline0
I think brooke is just trying to be outrageous again...