logo crit perhaps?
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- uberdesigner0
looks like a malformed penis blowing a load
- uberdesigner0
looks like a malformed penis blowing a load
- grymes0
or really? wow, thanks.
- lvl_130
not a bad start. the image quality on your pic is pretty terrible though. it looks as if you brought an illo file into flash and saved it out? all the edges are very abrupt...
- Hewmiri0
looks nice, maybe make the leafs of the pear the same color as the type?
- grymes0
No thats fine. It brings up a good point. Is this logo screaming Steve Jobs? Not exactly what I am looking to do.
- horton0
to be honest; yeah i think you're too close to Apple..
the leaves especially.
i know its just a fruit, but you've got that same ultra simplified flat shape.
maybe try a more organic looking shape.. with depth and detail in the stem & leaves.
- quamb0
i duno - didn't think of apple to someone mentioned it.
i like it. perhaps just play around with different 'pears' until you're happy.
- mrbee28280
Those are some big ass tits uber. I didn't feel Apple either until mentioned. I was thinking it's a bit symetrical. Try doing something with the leaves a bit and maybe scew a point on the path to make the pear not so "perfect". That's going to be nice when you finish it up though.
- Jnr_Madison0
I'm not a fan of serif font either.
- rasko40
yeah yeah you're called pear so loike I fought yeh, I fought wot abowt doing a pear loike, knowhatimean it makes sense an that like apple has an apple, nike as a nike thing, job done innit.
- winter0
nice.
only one tiny thing i've noticed:
the fact that the pear is not symmetric doesn't quite fit the spirit of the logo; near the stem the curves are not equal.
- mbr0
I like it. I didn't think of Apple at all.
The 'ware' is too distracting, imo. But it looks good.
- version30
i still see a lightbulb
- rasko40
well tilt your head down dumbass the screen isn't on the ceiling!
- thismanslife0
I instantly thought of Appleā¢
Sorry.
- josimarX0
mbr, you obviously aren't cut out for graphic design if you didn't see the apple resemblance.
and it REALLY GRINDS MY GEARS when people post a fucking logo, and don'y say what the fucking company is for. Fucksake. So, we're like, errrr, critting a shape and a word?