Portfolio mini-site...
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- 3rr0r-404
I had a little job interview today... so the night b4 the interview (yesterday) i put in 3 hours to make this piece of junk to show my work...
Now, although I am scared to do this... im posting the link here.. lets see wat happens..
- kelpie0
hmm, the 3rd person thing grates a little, but it looks pretty nice and its a decent concept for a 3 hour blast...
- DeviceUnseen0
the navigation sucks - most people want to click click click and rocket through the work.
it's good for 3 hours but I assume you want feedback so you can fix it.
- Andys0
looks good, navigatiion bit confusing, nice use of typography though!
- 3rr0r-4040
thanks guys for all the feedback..
- seed0
I like the work. The site isn't bad but it is a pain to navigate. Make the navigation easier and clearer and you will have a decent quick site design.
- Nairn0
I like it - cute, simple and small.
I'd watch your language (moiz sounds like a 4 year old, imo) and add a wee-dafty project on yoyur fullstop, after 'things'.
..and maybe do something with the focus outline on your links - I'd get rid of it, even if it's not 'proper', as it kind of glitches the cleanness.
- mg330
sweet font on that grids page - what is it?
- mg330
I actually like the third person aspect, it makes me smile - probably the name Moiz.
- 3rr0r-4040
hehe thanks Nairn and mg33..
the font on the grids page is Universal by Herbert Bayer... not a good text face.. but could work as a headliner...
and yeah, i wanted people to smile and find it cute and shit... and ofcourse the name "Moiz" is not anything you come across everyday... the third person aspect will maybe help people to remember my name later on...
thats my explaination of it... but the real explaination is that it was made in 3 hours :D
- wedgehead0
nice hack job..JK the work speaks for itself...nice
- jevad0
nice work - solid...but yeah - would be more impactful with a simple one pager
- seed0
"the third person aspect will maybe help people to remember my name later on..."
That could be true.
- seed0
Maybe you should improve the nav or simplify it. I know it was a quick job but if going for a web job they may assume that you can't design navigation well.
- 3rr0r-4040
you're most probably right seed... as soon as i get some time (read: get unlazy) i will redesign the whole thing...
as far as one-pagers are concerned, i personally dont like them... there r too many of them...
- Sven_sk0
wow. that type is REALY big and REALLY black. navigation is confusing. doesn't hold my attention.
nice for three hours though.
- jevad0
as far as one-pagers are concerned, i personally dont like them... there r too many of them...
3rr0r-404
(Apr 28 06, 12:11)there's a reason for that
- 3rr0r-4040
there's a reason for that
jevad
(Apr 28 06, 12:13)haha, probably because all of us are lazy...