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- pye0
lift chair in the top image is hanging at an angle, makes it look like they're in an avalanche or something
- Tara0
I don't really like the style. It feels so much like a cheap advertisement. Yes you are selling but you have so many colors- why not pick a simpler palette?
Also, you need to think about hierarchy with your type. Maybe the headlines should be in caps or bigger?
In the boxes, why not have less type and more space and then have a link to click for more info.
- Jaline0
too cluttered for my liking
- gfro0
not up to par.
- dinky0
so damn busy. text needs more room to breath. more letting etc etc
where are your borders for each grid? where are you buffers?
- easy_target0
hey thanks, noted & will make changes..
- uberdesigner0
you mispelled sking
- Jaline0
you mispelled sking
uberdesigner
(Apr 19 06, 14:26)?
- blackspade0
"churr" ?
i smell a kiwi
- easy_target0
i've mis spelt alot of things whilst typing tonight mainly due to the wine consumed over dinner but i dont think i mis spelt skiing....
- nocomply0
Def. too busy and cluttered. Need more spaces between the boxes and between the text and the borders of the boxes.
Also maybe flip to a mirror image of your header graphic so you can put the domainname on the left instead of the right.
- easy_target0
hey blackspade yeah kiwi as the come but in rome italy for a year....you still in dunnos? (if memory serves right...its been awhile)