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- mybrokenshoe
Hello folks
I am just workng on a label for a client and just wondered if anyone could crit me?
The product is for kobe beef created in cornwall uk
It is mainly the text but i would be interested in hearing any opinions on it, i feel like i am stuck! The bull will be renderd in a style similar to :
any help would be much appreciated.
cheers
- ********0
hahaha... i love it. it makes me laugh and is clever.
nice start.
- ********0
nice--adorable!
I wonder if a slab serif would be better
- mybrokenshoe0
Hello KOna and Rand Thanks for taking a look, will try a slab serif see if thathelps, will probably be back in a minute if you around...
- blackspade0
wont load for me
- _salisae_0
it doesn't open for me
?
- bulletfactory0
unable to connect
- i_monk0
trrrrrists got your domain.
- mybrokenshoe0
Damn trrrrrists!!!!!
My computer just went mad too!
Is it working now? when i click it comes up so maybe i am in a parrarllel universe...
- mybrokenshoe0
whoops forgot to put the link
If that don't work maybe this will:
If that doesn't work i will cry!
- bulletfactory0
yes, works for me
- _salisae_0
it's cool. why all the drop shadows?
- gfro0
I own a gourmet food store and sell Kobe for $78 for a 12 oz steak. Serious people buy this stuff, so I wonder if the logo is skewed a bit to young for such a hi-end product.
- mybrokenshoe0
it's cool. why all the drop shadows?
_salisae_
(Feb 22 06, 14:13)shhh... don't tell anyone...
Only because at without them on th bull he sinks into the background. The wite bar's shadow is a bit uneccasary.
Will play around and show without...
- mybrokenshoe0
I cannot find any of my slab fonts, they seem to have gone walkies! So i cannot show the revised version with slabs, yet. sorry.
If anywone is interested. No drop shadows:
- chz0
doesn't have much shelf or appetite appeal... is this a niche product?... what do the competitors look like?
- ********0
Does drunken beef have to be all lower case? The lower d is off opticaly against the C.
And what is the crit?
- ********0
here it is in same case as yours, but slab serifs and less shadow
- ********0
d still doesn't work for me.
- ********0
just showing him a slab serif
- ********0
It was the same case bit I was talking about.