Logo Crit
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- ldww0
i think its pretty slick.
the small text is not readable thou, maybe a heavier type.
- ********0
"Security and Investigations is hard to read on the navy background. the white fonts are too thin on it and are disappearing in the blue
- ldww0
do you know where is something wrong with the coley website in safari? the layout is thrown wayyyyy off.
- ********0
also the colours a re dull or muddy looking, is there a way you can adjust it to brighten it up? or is the colours you must use?
- TheAristocrat0
Yeah, I'm not too happy with the typeface overall, It's kind of generic. If any one has any suggestions I will happily accept them.
- ldww0
i agree with epill about the colors. that yellow is kinda baby poop colored.
- TheAristocrat0
The coley site is probably off, I was just learning CSS when it went up and there wasn't much time to work on it or troubleshoot. Hopefully soon I can fix it.
- ********0
I like it. And I don't mind the bustard and blue combination either.
The white text does get lost though. Needs more weight or a stronger font.
- gfro0
Approved.
next crit please.
- ********0
Um.. that would be mustard.
- TheAristocrat0
The colors are richer in the pantone book 432 and 457. It's a little baby pooish, I'll try some other color combinations as well.
- mr_snuggles0
Nice work...
- ********0
dont go by colours printed in a book, use this:
http://www.redbrick.dcu.ie/help/…
since its web, you should see what you are using rather than a book of 16million colours.
- kev_charlton0
i like it.
looks smart on the white.
- motokiss20
looks fresh dude just work on the font and u are good to go!!
- TheAristocrat0
Anyone have a font suggestions.
- mr_snuggles0
People seem to like Serifa a lot lately...
- gruntt0
the "investigations" hanging off the right side of the horizontal layouts bothers me a little but all in all they're damn nice.
i'd hit it.
- Sharif0
Maybe make the white space between the wings a little thicker? I like it though
- blastofv0
nice work – we just did some branding for a security company as well – the industry is way overloaded with shields and wings and stars and eagles (mostly terrible and miserably designed), but we were driven to similar iconography by our client as well. and yours is turning out far nicer.
I dig the palette too – no need to tinker there in my opinion.
and I agree with the rest on the knockout secondary type...it may work in print, but extra small or at 72 dpi it's trouble