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- nooner0
nice. the one thing that bugged was the tag on the right side making everything slightly off center. other than that it's solid.
- madirish0
narrow. very, very narrow.
any reason why you limited yourselves to such a narrow layout? the palette is nice, but the whole thing feels very cramped to me and small.
- irrelevant0
thanks guys.. yeah I was trying to think of snazzy content headers without sounding cheezy.
The resize handles have fooled a few people too.. :)
- irrelevant0
it is a little narrow, but I felt it was tastefully done with the limited content that is on it.
I felt it also looked good on all resolutions unless you were looking at it on 4024x2060..then there would be a ton of whitespace..
- version30
there's a ton of whitespace on my 1600*1200 but i don't view anything at full screen. I like it. it appeals more to that wants and needs of those looking to do business with you instead of overdosing on all that you have done for the sake of ego...or something
i likes
- VectorMasked0
I think it's looking good.
The only things I would change is the width of the layout. Go for an extra 50-100 pixels more or something. This way you also wouldn't have very small images of your work.
Also the problem is the tag. It should be extra. The contents of the page should be aligned with the gray box and the tomato and not with the tag.
- irrelevant0
thanks vector, will consider adding more width..
- designaked0
Nice site but I would definitely include the additions/changes that vector suggested. Esp. bumping it another 50 pix in each direction.
- mayo0
i like it. fun and clean. The narrowness only kinda bothers me on the Work section.
Now, here's the part where people get annoyed with me:
In your headlines, "Missing Identity" is the only one with initial caps. Is this intentional?
I saw a little bit of copy i wouldn't mind cleaning up. Mainly punctuation. I didn't read all of it yet, though.
- irrelevant0
mayo, the intial caps was an accident..will change.
I do have a few grammatical errors to fix, just finished the site lastnight.
but feel free to point out any others..
thanks
- designaked0
Now, here's the part where people get annoyed with me:
In your headlines, "Missing Identity" is the only one with initial caps. Is this intentional?
I saw a little bit of copy i wouldn't mind cleaning up. Mainly punctuation. I didn't read all of it yet, though.
mayo
(Feb 13 06, 11:24)--------------------
Good stuff mayo....and I agree completely. Most people tend to gloss over the copy and it is, most times, even more important than the visuals. The copy in the tomato site is pretty good but, ya, there are a few things to clean up. I always make sure to copy and paste any copy from a site into Word to run a spell and grammar check on it....unless, of course, it is a site where I don't care if the copy is clean.
Also, tomato (irrelevant), watch your breaks. You have a couple of words dangling on their own on the bottom line of paragraphs.
- irrelevant0
naked..
thanks for the advice and comments.
I will brush up teh content tonight..
- mattyd0
not to be 'that guy', but isn't there already a tomato?
- designaked0
Ya, but irrelevant is a Texas Tomato.
- irrelevant0
haha..nice call naked
in fact I should have been "mater" creative {thick texas accent}
- mayo0
check your mail irrelevant :)
and thank you designaked. abizzyman didn't give me the NT award for "always cleaning up copy first when asked about how a site looks" for nothing :P