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- designaked0
Now, here's the part where people get annoyed with me:
In your headlines, "Missing Identity" is the only one with initial caps. Is this intentional?
I saw a little bit of copy i wouldn't mind cleaning up. Mainly punctuation. I didn't read all of it yet, though.
mayo
(Feb 13 06, 11:24)--------------------
Good stuff mayo....and I agree completely. Most people tend to gloss over the copy and it is, most times, even more important than the visuals. The copy in the tomato site is pretty good but, ya, there are a few things to clean up. I always make sure to copy and paste any copy from a site into Word to run a spell and grammar check on it....unless, of course, it is a site where I don't care if the copy is clean.
Also, tomato (irrelevant), watch your breaks. You have a couple of words dangling on their own on the bottom line of paragraphs.