logo Crit
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- mattyd0
i like the top one better. the colors seem to evoke the mood 'tuscany' more in my opinion.
- 305artist0
ditto
- jaybee0
what does ditto mean?
- 305artist0
it means," i second that. "
- jaybee0
ah ok
- 305artist0
Cheers.
- zerofour0
I think i saw this kind of logo before somewhere and it's same color somemore... might be in Loslogos or Doslogos
you might want to redesign...
- jaybee0
ugh? where man?
- jaybee0
not getting much crit, u lot there??
suggestions?
- kelpie0
hello, looks nice, but I'd do something about the 't' in essentials - its a little wonky imo :)
- jaybee0
ok kelpie, good suggestion....thanks
- Jude_smith0
Nice and clean, top colours better, Is it for health food, cosmetics etc. As thats the fealing I get from it. The tracking/Kerning could do with some work though in particular the n and t in esseNTial and the y on the end of tuscanY could be a bit tighter. I'd also maybe line the U under the T with so it creates a clean line, see how that looks, phew think I'll stop there, other wise nice enough.
As for dos logos jesus if you went and looked through that book hard enough you'll find any thing that resembles anything. Depends on HOW much it resembles it. I don't know if those books are inspiring or disheartening!
PJ
- Jude_smith0
Nice and clean, top colours better, Is it for health food, cosmetics etc. As thats the fealing I get from it. The tracking/Kerning could do with some work though in particular the n and t in esseNTial and the y on the end of tuscanY could be a bit tighter. I'd also maybe line the U under the T with so it creates a clean line, see how that looks, phew think I'll stop there, other wise nice enough.
As for dos logos jesus if you went and looked through that book hard enough you'll find any thing that resembles anything. Depends on HOW much it resembles it. I don't know if those books are inspiring or disheartening!
PJ
- jaybee0
i agree about doslogos....also worst site i've seen in a long time ...jeez can't understand a thing
about ur crit Jude...i'll try that out thanks
- auxillary0
Of course ONE. Tuscany is terracotta!
- sktII0
It's clean enough. Agree about the kerning.
What is it for?
- joqui0
i like the green one... reminds me of olive tree leaves...
- jaybee0
it will be mainly for a website that rents tuscany villas and apartments.
- jaybee0
made a few changes:
- change the t in essential
- fixed kerning on N & T in essential
- fixed kering on Y in tuscanywhat do you think??
- imakedesign0
i like it but there are many logos like it: