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- RustyBadge
Any comments etc, most welcome.
- stewart0
why is the html version that different from the flash version?
and where is the work?
- jamble0
Nice touch with the shadow at the bottom following the menu.
It's a neat little flash site but I think you should actually put examples of your work on it rather than just listing names of clients because without seeing what you can do for them it's kind of difficult to see how good your agency is.
Also, please please please don't launch the site in a popup window. There's nothing there that needs it to launch in a popup window so stick to showing it in your browser.
- sktII0
Needs work.
I like the shadows at the bottom. I think they make the site. But I would keep them all the same depth. As if the light source was directly above the white pannels. Soemthing jars at the moment.
Needs work.
Needs work.
- RustyBadge0
html site was a bit of an afterthought.
As for examples of work, we discussed that and decided against having work examples live on the website. Finding new clients isn't a major problem for us (at the moment). Who knows... we may add some snippets later. We also built www.admire.se
- PublikStar0
quite nice, but need to show some work!
- RustyBadge0
That's a good point skt II - cheers.
- imakedesign0
NO POP UP.
- josimarX0
kinda nice, the light source from that photo is top right, so your shadows look weird. I'd pick a different photo with a high central light source and make the ground beneath the info closer, so the shadows aint so far away - they just look odd way down there. nice though.
- sktII0
As for examples of work, we discussed that and decided against having work examples live on the website. Finding new clients isn't a major problem for us (at the moment).
RustyBadge
(Feb 3 06, 04:14)Why have a site then?
- RustyBadge0
As for examples of work, we discussed that and decided against having work examples live on the website. Finding new clients isn't a major problem for us (at the moment).
RustyBadge
(Feb 3 06, 04:14)Why have a site then?
R.E. Well we quite like the frost.se website. I dare say we'll build something better in due course.
- digilee0
http://www.frost.se/html/require…
Went straight here.
A bit lame to deny someone entry considering I have Flash 8 installed.
- jeedoubleu0
The design is smooth, but the movement doesn't compliment this smooth criminal.
What's really sweet about the this site is that you can easily refresh the design by simply changing the BG image.
But if you don't show any work I won't bookmark it.
- chaztoo0
show work.
- mbr0
NO FULL SCREEN!!!!
If I came across your site, I would have immediately closed it. No need for the pop up, too.
1 - I like the design, but I dont' like bouncy movement - a eased slow down would look better, imho
2 - show work even if it's just small images. I would have had no idea what you do, nor cared, without pretty pics.
3 - 'Frost' is the name? Then why the alley/grundgy bg image? I would have rather seen something that suggests 'Frost'.Clean and smooth is what comes to my mind with the name. I'd tie in your as and bg image to that and it'll come together very nicely, with minimal work.
- Dancer0
Like everyone else said - Showing work would help.
Plus I dunno it it's just me but the flash is so jumpey it's untrue, therefore looks amateur.
I like the look but I'd work on the code. Drop the poop up as well
- lnu0
Decide on wether to use aliased or anti-aliased lines, the lines connecting the menu and the content (if you can use aliasing on lines?) because now, some are pixel perfect and some are a bit blurred.
Love the shadows but they need work.
- jpolk0
ani's choppy on my PB.
- inhaler0
looks good. I think everyone else said it.. show work.. blablabla..
my only thing is that if you wanted to get really really slick, if you could work with the shadow to be affected by the light source in the background.. that would be slick.
- jevad0
stick that fullscreen up yer arse!
- radar0
wheres the work - all that and nothing to look at?