Card Crit II
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- craic_whore0
Have you tried laying it out in portrait?
yea it looks like a speaker cone btw
- Baskerville0
very nice.
The speaker/eye just hits the spot of not too obvious/not too subtle.
If I didn't know it was there I may not notice it but that's the point, it's a 'bonus'
In terms of type, there are always an infinite number of permutations of what you have, so I'll let others suggest those.
One thing: I'm a fan of not writing 'mobile' 'email' etc. It usually doesn't need to be stated, especially in this case. It is obviously a mobile because the number starts 07. It's obviously an email address because there's an @ in it etc.
Just my preference to keep things minimal.That way the details could run along the bottom of the card in a straight line.
maybe a bit like this crude example:
- rasko40
the more I look at your image the more it looks like a close up of tub girls bits doing their thing
- neenaw0
And I thought no one would get that bonus. Bit too subtle I thought.
- nooner0
personally.
i think the feather should be an 80% gray. I don't like the stark contrast, but i love the shapes in the feather.
the font works for me.
overall i dig.
nice work