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- chossy0
They are all shite what you need to do is a white face slowly becoming browner, therefore encompassing the spectrum of races you cater for bamm there you have it.
- DavidFelt0
you in a 'funny; mood today chossy me old mucka?
- chossy0
I like the third one in concept 2 where all the letters are stacked together, I also like the last one on the top line.
- NylonMade0
i like 1
but that concept has been used alot
reason i say i like 1 is cause it can translate well in small to large scale. bit more spacing with the inner lines since if it does go smaller, the lines will disappear.
great work though
not sure about 4, it does not disthinguish from other letters if it was the have other text beside or around it.
stacked logo tends to be hard to manage with in combination with other letters
also that one has two equally strong elements to it that it would be hard to break up
- NylonMade0
i meant to say the first one in the first concept.
think about geometrical lines weight. changes in the weight can also cause the eye impression to be less pleasing
- DavidFelt0
Thanks guys, nobody think '4' works then, i thought maybe that could be tight, a tight idea at least, if not (admittedly) worked up to the highest of standards....
Regarding one, with a change of weight this could become a decent logo?
- NylonMade0
i believe if you could connect the two elements than i think it would work
maybeplay with the addition text elements around the 4th one and see how it would work.
i think 1st one can work but mind u as i have said, there are logos that look similar to that
- MrRemote0
Not really getting anything from any of these. I'd try to incorporate the idea of movement (ie. a to b) Maybe look to the old CN Rail logo for inpiration.
Maybe an italic.
I don't know, just off the top of my head.