Logo Crit
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- mg330
That's really cool, and much cooler that you show the graphic on a fabric.
Nice.
- dopepope0
pretty cool
- Nairn0
slightly pastiche, maybe -
but I Like.
- e_b_c0
good work!
i think the ® should be a touch heavier. or the crossbones lighter. not sure.
- ivan_cook0
e_b_c-
I kinda agree. I want to make the ® heavier.
I need to find out more about the limitations on actual detail when making stitched labels.
I've found a few places that look good to make labels online, but anyone have any personal experience/recommendations?
They must be Made in the USA.
Thanks
- johndiggity0
why not screenprint a stitched-look label? labels itch anyway. best of both worlds. and it's ironic commentary.
- ivan_cook0
johndiggity-
interesting idea, but I want it to have the look/feel of the red levi's tab.
this label will also not be on the garments in a place like the neck.
- madirish0
place the stitched label on the outside of the shirt? like on the seam from the pit down, ~5-6" from the bottom hem? that would look cool given the nature of the design of the label itself.
and it could be a nice element of branding the line.
- ivan_cook0
madirish-
exactly. :-)
- madirish0
the cook and i are like this......
;)
- gruntt0
me like.
well done.
- spendogg0
me likey - nice work
- ivan_cook0
Thanks for the incouragement and kind words...
...so now if I make this stuff, you guys are gonna buy it, right?
;-)
- thompson0
nice work - i like it
i will buy it,
but keep the tag small-ish
- versa0
i think it is just fine, but admittedly feel like i have seen very similar marks to that repeatedly for the last 3yrs, esp. in the apparel and poster worlds ...
judging from your other superb work, and the fact that you would want to really differentiate your line with its branding, i would suggest something a bit more unexpected
- ivan_cook0
interesting....
over 125 views and only 10 people respond.
- arseni0
looks cool.
how about making a circle a bit thicker? no?
- MrWhite0
® is too plain.
what is the name of the company and what kind/style clothes are you selling? a crit would make more sense if you gave more background info on the company.
- -scarabin-0
looks perfect to me
- BuddhaHat0
Agreed with MrWhite... if we knew a little bit more we could be more descriptive with praise or criticism.
That said, I do like the logo. Great colour contrast, and it looks great on that material.
I'd like to see the ® slightly thicker white (the circle and the letter), and the ball/curve on the bottom end of the bones lacks definition, they should be more like the top ends of the bones.