Logo Crit
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- horton0
sweet font? i beg to differ.
- Bluejam0
nmad
- chossy0
put a white stroke round the penguin so it masks off the bit of the text his arms wings flippers cross over then you have something, he he I like the wee panguin come here wee fella come on.
- skt0
nmad
Bluejam
(Jan 17 06, 09:35)Only if you're a bit slow.
Don't mind it. What's it for?
- Tiina_G0
who doesn't like Neo by Sebastian Lester? Typographica certainly like it http://typographi.com/000969.php…
You think the 'O' in NOMAD is hard to read?
- g3kk0k1d0
does it pass the black and white test?
- chossy0
nah it's easy peasy lemon squeezy :D
however befreinding the penguin isn't he pure bit me so I threw it into the sea.
- g3kk0k1d0
i like the font
- horton0
who doesn't like Neo by Sebastian Lester? Typographica certainly like it typographi.com/000969.php
Tiina_G
(Jan 17 06, 09:37)yeah but doesn't mean it'll work well in every application.
the A and D have a nasty relationship here and don't sit well for me.
maybe you could edit the vectors and give them a more flat top... equal to the N and M.
- Tiina_G0
Cholla? I mean chossy (looking at fonts fo two long now) Sorry he bit you, I'll have him executed immediately, little bastard
- horton0
did you try it with lowercase Neo?
might create a more interesting shape as a logo, and allow you to emphasize the penguin a little more.
+ it sounds as though the company would suit lowercase well.
- i_monk0
I like it better without the white stroke.
- designaked0
I like it (with a couple suggestions its pure gold):
1. Tighten up kerning a hair around the "A".
2. Round out the belly of the penguin a bit more....it will help the subtle representation of the "O" a bit better.
3. Don't do a white stroke all the way around the "wings" but do it so that its on top of the wings and slices in bigger at the edge of the letter and then it tapers off to nothing at the tips of the wings.
BTW...I like that you aren't following the trend of making everything lowercase.
ALSO....if you're not sure what I'm talking about with the stroke on the top of the wings then I can mock it up quick here and then send you the file to look at.....unfortunately I don't have access to an FTP here at work....stupid corporate firewall bullshit!
- dirtydesign0
NO stroke!
Explore type.
Nice typeface, but doesn't feel 'finished'.
- chossy0
I think your stroke will need neatening up.... perhaps work on it like how design naked suggested, I like the penguin allot but I just feel it needs to be integrated with the text a little more.
- uberdesigner0
penguins arent nomads
- Typographica0
Intel likes Neo too.
- DavidFelt0
Make one of the wings 'in front' of one letter, and 'behind' the other letter, to incorporate him more! Nice work though
- mr_snuggles0
lose the yellow on his chest!
Try another typeface too, this one isn't working for me...