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- F_180
thank you rand! thats exactly what i was trying for!
- Rand0
the thin-ness of the lines and type against the stark black is what appeals to me about it
- Rand0
don't change that fucking typeface, or I'll have to come after you!
- Rand0
I like it a lot. I like the typeface. to me this I looks way better than the cliche paiintdrippy things it's beeng compared to
- spiralstarez0
no probs :-) Just my crit
- F_180
sorry there sprialz.
- F_180
only the drips kona....only the drips.
- spiralstarez0
I'm a big hater of the un-announced email app spawn.
leave the email link on the 'say hello' link and take it off the image.
I expect that to go from your splash page to a website, not to email.
- todelete__20
you want me to pour some milk on my body and take pics for you?
- F_180
poison, thats an idea.
cool.
- quoo0
minion?
hrm, i was thinking you could treat the milk bottle like.. i dunno, an old fashioned poison bottle or something.
- F_180
any typeface suggestions?
- F_180
yeah, but i don't know if i wanna go the "milk bottle" route. dark and existential was my direction, so i'd like to be more abstract than literal.
- aliceblue0
Like the idea of Milk ...just milk
-if it looked like milk
- xenicon0
the bouquet looks long and pinched, slightly funereal too.
- xenicon0
the bouquet looks long and pinched, slightly funereal too.
- quoo0
the bottom text is also too small to read easilly.
- quoo0
if we can't tell it's milk right away, it's a problem. maybe an old fashioned milk bottle? As others have said, the font is illegible and doesn't make much of a statement. The flowers are bothering me a little as well, they seem to be on a much smaller scale than the rest of the elements on the page. I'd try to find something from an old botanical book as well, these have too 'new' a feel to them.
- F_180
thx kona
- F_180
noted on the type.
and its not paint drips - its milk. she has a column called the "milk memo" which is going to transfrom into a blog. my bad, should've noted that.