site crit, please
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- leftwave
i'm designing a site for a nutritionist who wants something bright, clean, with a big menu, that displays good food.
what do you think??
http://leftwave.com/indevelopmen…
- ********0
instead of a mid-to-late thirties woman stock photo, you should use a 19 yr old diddling herself with a vibrator
I like #1 better, dunno about the flourescent foodstuffs
- forcetwelve0
i like no 2. the top image is nice, nice type, but it kinda fizzles out at the lower half of the interface.
- rockonski0
#2 is better. much better. it's the pale blue and the orange. fantastic.
- leftwave0
thanks for the feedback, guys.
i just added a 3rd design too:
http://leftwave.com/indevelopmen…
- ********0
#2 has better balance at the top but that chick looks like she's from milf hunter
- BuddhaHat0
2's got my vote... the greyed text at the bottom is a little light, but that could just be my monitor settings...
I prefer the blue colour-scheme in 3 to number 1, but 2's still got it.... the top pic is so vibrant... nice.
- forcetwelve0
those 4 boxes need work to me.
- piperboytoy0
I like the layouts. the first is the best in terms of bright color goes. everything works well together.
- slappy0
number two... concept number two that is.
- mitsurugi0
take the orange off of her elbow.
- waynepixel0
2. Very Good.
- s_t_e_w0
hmm, the number two header image is too much XP-like for me.
and the muffin is getting too much attention, and doens't go well with the word philosophy.
or is it because it's lunchtime in about 10 minutes here...
- waynepixel0
I would loss the orange. Its seems to be out of place with the rest of the layout.
- CFish0
one
- sureshot0
2. looking freshy
- s_t_e_w0
6
- MrT0
I like them all!
BUT
devil's advocate time... from a client's perspective aren't they effectively all the same? If your client doesn't like the photography and pallette then small positional changes are moot.
Sorry if you've gone through the selection process of different phot, type and graphic element styles. But if I was a client this is all just one concept...
I'll go now.
- MrT0
I mean photography not phot
- spongebob0
I like the original. Would like to see her fingers stick out of the frame though.
- leftwave0
thanks for your feedback everyone. i like the orginal one too, but of course the client has no taste and wants me to do all of this other crap.
they do pay the bills. so, back to f*cking up my design....