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- coco_ono0
gah!
that link didn't work for me.
go here instead:
http://artfulicious.blogspot.com…sorry and thanks,
coco
- codfather0
I like the bottom one best but reckon you should just have the AF and dump the words...
- DavidFelt0
As soon as I read your intial thread it sounded like a good idea but i was dissapointed when i saw the visuals, i dont think they are as strong as they could be or convey the concept as efficiently as they should
Just my tuppence worth!
- MrT0
I'm wiith Mr Felt.
The ice-melt concept is 'undone' by the hard graphic and weight of the type. Maybe also the colours which could be toned down.
It's not about being literal all the time but melting ice is 'soft' and pretty much colourless (don't eat yellow snow).
Also, if you lost the words, will people know what AF means?
Hope that helps a bit...
- MeMeYou0
Be a lot more illustrative with the theme, the stylised graphics don't represent what u wish to achieve well enough.
Not into the style all to much either.
- coco_ono0
these were just the tweakings, but your feedback is a lot of help...thanks. i'll keep you posted
- i_monk0
I like the melting ice block in blue, but the type is too strong. Go with the name, not the acronym.